Look Into My Eyes

~*~please tell me how i could improve this...i'm not sure i really like it~*~

Look into my eyes
You'll see the truth
You'll see beyond the lies
Lies told each day

Look deep inside
Past the smile on my face
See into my mind
Deep under this charade

Look into my eyes
Do you see the truth
Do you see beyond the lies
The lies I tell each day

Do you see the girl within
Scared, alone, and crying
Can you see past my grin
To see I'm silently screaming

Look into my eyes
Tell me the truth
Tell me if you can see past my lies
Lies told...each day