Sheding My Own War

by Hannah Tiernan   Mar 8, 2006


Its like a waterfall is falling on my heart
and i bomb has exploded in my head
its as if poison is running through my viens
and these are the things i want to shed

All these things are how i feel
all these things are hurting me inside
the pain that I am feeling
Is the pain deep inside me that I hide

Sometimes I just wanna run away
sometimes I want to break down and cry
I go through so much everyday
that sometimes i wanna die

I have all these wonderful friends
and they're always there
but in my mind i wonder
if the way i feel is good to share

somethimes i feel like nobody
like a speck of dirt on the wall
i feel like im in a crowded room screaming
waiting for someones call

so the waterfall keeps falling on my heart
and the bomb as still exploding in my head
and the poison is still running in my veins
and these feeling i still want to shed

**PlZ vOte AnD cOmMeNt**

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  • 18 years ago

    by anonymous

    Oh hunny, you can ALWAYS talk to me, just go to one of my poems, you dont even have to read it, and just write to me how your feeling!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Nearly but not quite

    That was really sad and really good, very deep. I liked the flow, and nice imagery, "i wonder if the way i feel is good to share" my favourite bit, cos i feel like that too. Thanks for the comment on my poem too! 5/5
    Helen

  • 18 years ago

    by sarah

    Great poem hun keep them coming thanks 4 your comment meant alot take care sarahx