Suicide

by BrokenREALiTy   Mar 10, 2006


Flipping open the butterfly
Placing the blade to my skin
Sweat running down my face
This was a fight I could not win
Flashbacks coming back
All those smiles and tears
The "friends" I had, what they did
And all those wasted years
The boy who "loved" me
And broke my heart
The "family" that "cared"
We would soon be apart
A single tear runs down my face
Through my flesh, the blade goes
Time to say hello to heaven
And good-bye to all my woes
Out comes my blood
Red, like the color of a rose
My vision becomes blurry
As the door slowly begins to close
The life I've lived is disappearing
No need to go through anymore pain
For if I had to live through anymore
I swear, I will go insane
Soon I'm swimming in an ocean of red
My eyes close, my brain begins to shut down
I give one last smile
For there's no need to frown
My clothes soaked with blood
Face stained with tears that taste so sweet
I've come to my senses, I'm done
Now I'm willing to accept defeat
So I bid you farewell
Good-bye my dear friends
There's no need to cry
For this is how I want my life to end...
[c] 2O05

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  • 17 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    Flashbacks coming back <------ That line sooo annoyed me! Too many "backs" Lmao.

    Okies, suicide. Cliche, but I have suicide poems that are wayy worse. I mean they're only like three stanza's long. LMAO. Yes, yes, there's really no.. how do I say this.. "Wow" factor, but it was decent.

    Hehe, I've proved my point. Yours are better than mine. :]

    Cayce xx

  • 19 years ago

    by out of death

    I really like this poem, the way that you incorperate happiness through your sorrows. but it's only true.

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