Opened Eyes

by The Wingless   Mar 11, 2006


Tears of happiness
Ride along the wind
A pleasant aroma
accompanies it

Now, in this crowded world,
From here to it's horizon
what do you find in eyes
That hide emotions?

An unseen star
Guides us all on our journey
Unheard, Unnoticed
Flickering quietly

Take in your colorful past
Be responsible for what you say
Don't take back words
Show meaning

Being forgiven for tears
This way is not protection
The needle of time is early
Almost by an hour

That square sky seems unbreakable
Spreading it's hands
It swims across this small world

Only now
It can stop flowing
It knows a weakness
But I wanted to feel the heat

Crying over my dreams
Is childish and immature
I'll fill the empty space
With the power of words

The sun draws a circle
Around this plastic world
Because of holding in tears
I have even more

Let's say good bye right here
There's no need for excuses
I don't need this right now
Maybe my eyes are finally open.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Mona

    Ps; I'll read the other three new poems tomorrow. Maybe I should get some dam rest haha =)

  • 18 years ago

    by Mona

    Hmm did I read this before? Oh.. erm.. *thinks*.. O I read it, but probably forgot to commend.. Oo.. no now I remember I wanted to commend but I was short on time ghehe

    Anyway It's fantastic, that's all I can say

    Thanks for your comments again =) ghehe sweet you take the time to read my poems =)
    Though I think most of my old poems are shitty. Not that my new one are so much better, but I think they are atleast a little bit better. Hmm.. Or that's what I hope actually ghehe

    Anyway '.. bit in a weird mood right now. I seem to be unable to form an opiniun.. god how is that word spelled.. Opi.. Opinion.. =( Oh.. I'm even in a worse mood then I thought I was. hahahah
    And that wasn't even funny.

    Oh well.. another crappy comment

    =P Lotsaa love -xxx-

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