He Loves me....... He Loves me not

by Brigitte   Mar 14, 2006


Petal after petal falls to the floor,
As I chant my childish saying more and more.
He loves me….He loves me not.

Soon I’ll get to the last petal and find out,
What my destiny with you is all about.
He loves me…He loves me not

My daisy dwindles smaller and smaller,
I’m starting to sweat under my collar.
He loves me….He loves me not.

The final assessment has yet to come,
If it’s a no, I’ll feel so dumb,
He loves me…. He loves me not.

Only three petals left to go,
I close my eyes, so my expressions won’t show.
He loves me…. He loves me not.

Holding my breath, and clearing my mind,
I pick the last petals as my heart beats chime.
He loves me…. He loves me not.

I open my eyes and stare at the last petal,
My happiness boils over like a kettle.
…………..He loves me!

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  • 17 years ago

    by gemowski

    This is a fantastic piece, so realistic and heart touching.
    you've got a great talent.
    10/10

    gema
    xoxoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by glass*wall*prison

    This was a great poem
    wonderfuly written

    ~GLASS~

  • 18 years ago

    by Fallen~Tears

    I LOVE this poem.. it was such a good way to write one!! 5/5 EXCELLENT!!
    oh my favorite line was
    Petal after petal falls to the floor,
    As I chant my childish saying more and more.. wow so great!!

    ~!*FallenTears~!*
    ~!*Meaghen~!*

  • 18 years ago

    by SilentDreams

    This poem is cute in a kinda way lol. It's something us girls have all done whether we did it for a joke or not. I don't no why but it reminds me of summer and make s me feel really cheerful...Keep up the good work :D

  • 18 years ago

    by PS

    Its cute. kind of comical. and i like that its something new and the repetition is perfect. :)

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