Tonight

by Once an Angel   Mar 15, 2006


(verse one)
I come in, you throw me out
You're in pain, a tortured soul
You look at me, you're pretending
You're alright tonight

(verse two)
I come close, you walk away
Your tears fall, you're breaking down
Under your mask, you are screaming
Not alright tonight

(chorus)
Just give me one moment of time
And you will see, how I love you
I won't leave you alone again
Take a breath, and shed a tear
You're safe in my arms tonight

(verse three)
Holding you, you push away
You need me, to pull you through
But you can't see, I'm here for you!
To save you tonight

(chorus)
Just give me one moment of time
And you will see, how I love you
I won't leave you alone again
Take a breath, and shed a tear
You're safe in my arms tonight

(bridge)
Life is so hard, you gotta pull through
Your are stronger, than this shadow
You can't let it beat you!

(chorus)
Just give me one moment of time
And you will see, how I love you
I won't leave you alone again
Take a breath, and shed a tear
You're safe in my arms tonight

I know this poem isn't very intellectual, but it has a flow to it and it is a song so that might explain why it is basic. I hate being pushed away by my friends and I guess this is my way of venting. Tell me what you think!

-Tainted Mikochan

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  • 18 years ago

    by Tasha

    I liked the poem a lot because how it was written into a song and it was a great flow.

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    I wish i could hear the song!
    it's very sweet huni. As friends, we all feel that way, reaching out, being there for people and being pushed away, but as long as you stick around and you understand them, as i know you do, it'll be ok!
    love u sweetie
    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Very moving poem. I can hear the melody within it. Thank you for your comments.

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Hey i really liked this style of writing, good flow indeed.

    all the best and take care

  • 18 years ago

    by Unforgiven Retniap doolb

    Lost me in a couple of parts and your right it did flow pretty well.

    ~Good job.

    ~Retniapdoolb