Perfect Couple

by Monique   Mar 15, 2006


The snow is falling,
The skies are clear,
Seems like a magical night, a perfect night.
Where the moon shines, and the clouds disappear.

This is the night, where her dreams came true.
December 16, with a rose in his hand,
He came to her door,
Placed upon her, a great demand.

He knew the inevitable answer,
Handed her the rose, with lust in his eyes,
Leaned in, and kissed her softly.
Tonight, she got a great surprise.

After that they were inseparable,
Head over heels with lust,
Always together, fondling each other.
Others were jealous, looked in disgust.

Months passed, his lust grew into love.
Valentines Day, the perfect day to tell her he thought.
Took her out to dinner, gave her perfume and chocolates.
Took the plunge under the stars in the parking lot.

Looked deep into her eyes, as if he were searching for her soul.
Said, "Baby, I love you."
His heart racing, palms sweating, waiting for an answer..
After what seemed like eternity, she said, "I love you too."

He wrapped her tight in his arms,
Gently kissed her forehead
And squeezed her even tighter.
They became one, with those words said.

Destiny brought these two together.
Day after day,
Creating memory after memory
This love will grow stronger, and never stray.

** Written for my friend Rachael and her boyfriend Justin, Love ya both, and may ur love grow stronger and the days go on**

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  • 18 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    Aww i love it! beautiful love story :P
    -xXx-

  • 18 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Aww How cute ^_^, I love cute little loveable moments like these lol!

    Poem: Diction seems a little limited, however it worked. It painted a nice picture but left little to the imagination, I personally enjoy flowery words and poetry you can connect to due to the vague but well draw imagery, However I found this poem alluring and couldn't stop reading, which is key in a good poem =) You have great talent, never give it up =)

    Also, Welcome to Fishbowl, I'm very happy to have you aborad =) if you need anything let me know, I'm sorry I was not first to send you a comment =) Thankyou for reading the welcome message, any sugesstions I'mm be more then happy to see if they can be done =)

    Jenn

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Wow, this is really romantic and i just loved it.

    great poem indeed and great dedication to those lovers

    all the best and take care

  • 18 years ago

    by PURE HEART

    Lovely.......so romantic....5/5
    all the best to them......

    Bharti

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