Starvation Part 1

by Taylor   Mar 15, 2006


Fat, pudgy and soft
Is all that i see
Looking in a mirror
What's wrong with me?

I'm huge and I'm fat
I've tried diets and pills
I'll do anything to be skinny
Even if it kills

So one day I decided
I wasn't gonna eat
Every time i saw food
I looked down at my feet

day by day
I lost a little bit more
I began to see a difference
I wasn't fat any more

to be continued

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  • 18 years ago

    by morgan

    Yeah i've been writing more poems, but i just havent entered them into this, i have one like this that i havn't finished the last few stanzas and i think i'll put them up either today or tomarrow!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah

    Halu Taylor,

    Gosh...you ended it soo soon. : ( Lol. I can't wait to read more! Hurry up with part 2!! This is a 5 because it got me to anxious to read the rest.

    TAKE CARE-
    stargazer38