Um....

A good and touching write, but again needs some editing.
First line it should be "your"
Tenth line should read "You're forever my angel..."
On the twelth line it's not a misspelling as such but I think a confusion of words, where you have "further" it should be "future."
The fourth line didn't make sense to me at all and I think it needs rewording.
I liked the ending it gave hope for the future and sang wedding bells.
Keep writing.

Nice poem, although there are a few errors which can be improved upon. First - the third line was hard to make sense of - perhaps you could take a look and change that around? The fourth line, seem could be better as seems. The ninth line, Your should be You're and angle is spelt angel (unless its the mathematical term) you could also add in a comma after angel . . . In the tenth line, were should be we're and in the eleventh, further would probably sound better as future.
I hope all the above helps you to improve the grammar and spelling/punctuation of this poem because it is an excellent write - and the meaning is so lovely - with the ending wish of the ring - the symbol of marriage :)

Peace. [Sole]

Hey darl a heartfelt piece. hvnt sp0ken t0 u in a while. catch up s0on x0x

AMAZING!! :D :D