Why?

by ღ»Lσιѕ«ღ   Mar 17, 2006


The pain and suffering that burns through my heart
I just cant take it when were apart
When you told me that we were threw
I knew then there was nothing that I could do

It tore my heart into a million pieces
This feeling that your heart releases
I cant take it anymore I want to die
I raise up the knife as I start to cry

The knife is sharp against my wrist
I know now that I wont be missed
As blood from my veins start to burst
I think about how you were my first

I sat your picture next to the letter
That says how things just couldnt get better
One more slice and all my veins are cut
Here it goes now my eyes are shut

When they found me in the puddle of red
They knew then that I was dead

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  • 16 years ago

    by Toni Ann

    Great poem!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Connie

    OMG - very well written!

  • 17 years ago

    by Connie

    Very sad poem, but also was very well written. Great Job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Serenical Darkness

    One of the best i've read in a long time. its similar to how i write. excellent job

  • 17 years ago

    by ShadowedPhoenix

    This is a very good poem, i liked it but i think that in some parts of the poem you are forcing the rhyme and it detracts from emotion...but otherwise it was a good write