by ღ»Lσιѕ«ღ Mar 17, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
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The pain and suffering that burns through my heart |
by Toni Ann
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Great poem!! |
by Connie
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OMG - very well written! |
by Connie
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Very sad poem, but also was very well written. Great Job! |
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One of the best i've read in a long time. its similar to how i write. excellent job |
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This is a very good poem, i liked it but i think that in some parts of the poem you are forcing the rhyme and it detracts from emotion...but otherwise it was a good write |