Tell Us Your Secrets

by Allison   Mar 17, 2006


The cuts on your arms
The bruises on your face
Hidden little devil
Falling from grace

Tell us your secrets
We want to know
We'll try to help you
Hide the scars that show

The lines on your thighs
The pills under your bed
Hidden from the world
Lost in your head

Tell us your secrets
We want to know
We'll try to help you
Hide the scars that show

Your body is sore
You want to die
But you can't answer us
When we ask why

Tell us your secrets
We want to know
We'll try to help you
Hide the scars that show

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  • 18 years ago

    by The Angel of Secrets

    Excllent written. I have written some sad poems my self, you should check out "Just a little blood".
    Love,
    Line

  • 18 years ago

    by The Angel of Secrets

    Excllent written. I have written some sad poems my self, you should check out "Just a little blood".
    Love,
    Line

  • 18 years ago

    by Yella

    Excellent job... loved it... this is the 1st poem I have read from you and indeed I will keep reading more... keep up the good work! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by ShadowDancer

    It sounded almost like a song. the repetision of the second stanza was very effective. i loved the way you chose to write it like you were talking to someone. an exellent poem

    Ruby

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    This was really good!! Loved how you kept repeating that same stanza! It was great 5/5 =]

    luv natalie x-x-x

    P.s. Sorry if im taking awhile to do all the comments, Ive just got alot going on at the moment, But i will get them all done asap! =]

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