Last Breath.

by BlackxNailxPolishx   Mar 19, 2006


She was getting ready;
for her friends birthday.
She got a call;
her boyfriend broke up with her.
She started to cry;
but wanted her friend to be happy.
She went to take;
a bath to forget.
But what she forgot;
was to breathe.

When her friend;
came to her house.
She found her;
dead in the bathroom.
With a razor blade,
and HAPPY BIRTHDAY sign.
And on the wall;
Y?!

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  • 19 years ago

    by Christie

    This is such a moving poem. 5/5 every word seems perfectly chosen and placed. congrats
    xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by donk2ymouth

    The poem was interesting, it wasn't very descriptive and the flow was broken off but it was good to read. I liked how you ended with a question instead of a statement, most people don't generally do that in their poetry anymore. Good job.

  • 19 years ago

    by Lucy D1am0nd

    Woah that one was depressing

  • 19 years ago

    by glass*wall*prison

    Dang wasnt expecting that....nice tho

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