Beautiful poem ,the way you have put your feelings in words is amazing ,blessed are those who finds true pure love .

Best wishes,
Chavii.

Beautiful love poem.....take care and keep writing...

Far out that was an amazing read.5/5.lived it so much that i cud feel it in my heart too.lol. its so gud to be in love and feel it ,its an amazing feelind.isnt it?

takecare
all the best.

sonam

Wow this is beautiful!!!!!! i liked it
well done your flow was really good and the topic very sweet keep writting :d xx ALLY xx

Wow, wow, wow true emotions being laid here! Awesome poetry, I just loved every bit of it!!!
5/5 for sure!!! Keep up the good work!

Truly amazing! thanks for commenting on mine!

Ali

Beautiful as always, i really like love poems a lot nowdays and u r one of my fav...love reading ur poems.

great poem

all the best and take care

Oh. heart-melting words. bound to capture the pure innocence and romanticism of love. truly a masterpiece.

Simply put, this is one of the best poems I've read this morning. It's both passionate and innocenlty romantic at the same time. Beautiful!!

Sweet and lovely penn Pure Heart, nicely done!!!

AMAZING...
all i can say....lol

The feelings are just gushing from this poem. whoever you wrote this for, i wish the both of you luck. great poem

Can u send me this poem at tnycmrn18@yahoo.com.au if so thanks

Thanks for your comments meant alot,I have read just about all your poems, and all are great keep writing so i can keep reading take care hun sarah x

Absoultly beautiful, I loved it. You have an amazing way of making the words flow. Awesome Job. once again don't use Slang. instead of u use you.
Keep up the good work.

Another very nice poem.

I feel your strength...
Your hands crawling..
lost in your world...

Great work!

Another very nice poem.

I feel your strength...
Your hands crawling..
lost in your world...

Great work!

I like this one....Like I said on the other ones you are a really talented poet