The basement

by Micky   Mar 22, 2006


She sat there in the basement,
only with a knife.
That night when everyone would go to sleep
She decided to end her life.

She didn't want to live no more,
she really wanted to die.
So she took that knife, and stabbed herself,
but then started to cry.

She thaught about everyone that ever made her sad,
and about the people who loved her.
She started to scream, she wanted to live,
Her mind was a total blur.

Nobody heard her,
her screams, her cries
she looked at the letter
where she wrote her final goodbyes.

thx for commenting on my poem *Lost*Souls*

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  • 17 years ago

    by stephy

    Wow that brought on a tear

  • 18 years ago

    by Baybeeh

    I liked ur poem but the ending was a little crap

  • 18 years ago

    by SuicideQueen

    I could really imagine what was going on in my head... was very graphic! loved it an di liked your rhyme keep up the good work.. i added you to my favourites also :P take care xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by SuicideQueen

    I could really imagine what was going on in my head... was very graphic! loved it an di liked your rhyme keep up the good work.. i added you to my favourites also :P take care xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by DanielaDaniela

    Can I say your EMO