Breathe

by Ariana   Mar 22, 2006


Breathe

Can't you see - I'm trying hard,
I'm trying hard,
to breathe.

Trying to care,
gasping for air,
you're unaware
of me.

it flies so fast,
eludes my grasp
and soars right past,
my lungs.

My mind feels weak
can't seem to speak
light heartbeat, I'm undone.

Without a sound,
I start to drown,
I'm shutting down,
inside.

Please pull me out,
beg for your help,
till despite myself,
I cry.

The world grows dim
I die within
I could not win,
you see.

Fallen apart,
but I tried so hard,
I tried so hard,
to breathe.

*Metaphorical*

Yes, I know, it rhymes! Well now that I am trying to refrain from posting rhymy stuff (and since I tend to flame it alot), you may be wondering why this is on here! I actually don't know, perhaps I am regressing. I think I was trying to make it flow fluidly and then it just ended up rhyming. Smeh.

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  • 18 years ago

    by rar

    Hey i really like this poem. i love how it flows with everything.

  • 18 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Huh thats nice maybe u can read one of mine 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Mona

    This is wonderful! I love this poem. Very well done =)

    Nice written, with a fantastic flow!

    Lotsaaaaaa love
    -xxx-

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