When Angels Cry

by Emma   Mar 24, 2006


When angels cry
because of your lie
your childish fears
become angels tears

when angels cry
your pain will not die
everything you ever did haunting you
turning you world blue

When angels cry
they lose their reason to fly
all because you lied
this Angel slowly died...

**i really like this for some reason...so tell me what you think

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  • 18 years ago

    by Kaitlyn

    Sometimes the shortest poems are the best. I really like this piece.

  • 18 years ago

    by *~vixen~*

    First off i love this poem, 5/5, and um you have some spelling mistakes, not to be rude or anything.

  • 18 years ago

    by Mandee

    Hey cool poem i liked how it rhymed

  • 18 years ago

    by jess

    Yeah it was really good! short is sweet.
    i really like your style of work!!
    love jess XxXxXx

  • 18 years ago

    by BloodyXxXKisses

    Hey i really liked it
    short and sweet good work
    keep it up!
    x x x
    cler

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