Standing there..

by Luke   Mar 24, 2006


I feel it now,
Feel the pain..
See your struggle..
See your strain..

I want to hold you..
Hold your hand..
Help you cross..
This troubled land..

I Need you too..
But I\'ll hold it in..
So you\'re not scared..
Before we begin..

I need you baby..
Why can\'t you see?
That you talking \'bout him..
Is slowly killin\' me!

Please don\'t brag..
How much he loves you..
\'Cause i love you more..
Than anyone else could do..

Just Open your eyes..
To see Standing there..
Is the person who does..
Truly love and care..

Not one of those fake..
People who lie..
I love you more..
Just open each eye.

© of Luke 24th March 2006

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  • 18 years ago

    by Just Wishes

    Simple ,pure and sounds really true.

    kind regards,
    wishes

  • 18 years ago

    by Angela

    Aww, I like this! =)

  • 18 years ago

    by Carlee Ann

    I can really relate to this... good write. It's caring and yet sad... amazing. (thanks for the comments!) I think I'll add you to my favorites, I hope that's okay. Good job,

    Car

  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Wonderful Luke... So sad, yet so beautiful and loving at the same time! "one of the hardest things in life is having words in your heart that you cannot utter"

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylalala

    Luke i know that i comment on all of your poems but i just can't help it I love all of your poems you are just such an awesome writer. So much love and pain all in each word. SO GOOD!
    xxKaylaXX

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