Asphyxiation

by Joey   Mar 26, 2006


Catalepsy, paralyzed
suspension of the brain
execration, desperation
have I gone insane
pathological, conciseness
nearing the last breath
obscurity possessing my body
and all I see is death

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  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany

    Nice wording. Really cool poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by RockPixie

    I thought i could submit my comment in Dutch because I'm from Belgium but obviously the site doesn't accept other languages. Anyhow, i love your poem, it has this kind of thing that i can't explain. But I really like it. I can read it over and over again. By the way, i share your opinion about -so called god- and the whole b*llsh*t about how great he is - and let's praise him - and on, and on..
    I could go on for hours about my opinion but back to your poem, it's worth a 5/5.
    Greets; Nathalie

    [And I'm Not A Slave Of A God That Doesn't Exist]

  • 18 years ago

    by sarah

    Short but fantastic , great job, keep them coming take care hun sarah x

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