White Karma

Hey, firstly I want to say thanks for your comment; secondly I want to say..Wow! I really liked this. I have tried this style, with wording and such before and have not yet succeeded, but this will be one of those poems that I will come back and read for more information. You and Gary are both equally talented, and I am glad to see that you have come back to join the poetry world (whether you were kicking and screaming or not :p). Anyway, I know that these types of comments with absolutely not criticism are sometimes looked at as a waste of time, but I have no criticism to offer - just my praise. I loved it, and hope to see more. -Stefhy

I think i've read this one atleast a dozen times and each time, it leaves me for a short of words.

great writing
love
shobhana

What can I say, I'm all about political rants... well-written and heart- felt...I like it!