Hurt

by Andrea broken tears   Mar 27, 2006


Eyes red from the tears
heart hurts from the pain
feeling so unloved
going insane
Once again another Sunday night
you call and say your not coming
is that all right?
It's fine but deep down its a lie
You say I love you
I love you too
I'll call you later you say
then we hang up.
Start to cry
you were out playing hockey
now your not coming
you said you would
but guess not
But I do still love you.

*This is not true but its true*

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  • 18 years ago

    by Tigger

    I love this poem, so much emotion.
    im glad it isant true tho, i wouldent want to see you Sad again.

    xxx Tigger xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by alive in death

    Oh and thank you so much for your comment... it's nice to know that you cared enough to write a comment about how my writing made you feel.... that really meant alot to me.... if you want, read and comment more on mine,
    and i'll do the same for you... it helps to have people out there that really give a shit about what others have to say... and i have to say i give more then that....

    thank you agian,
    phil

  • 18 years ago

    by alive in death

    I've never been in a situation stemming around these exact circumstances.... but i belive that the feelings you portray can be compared to many other things to, and this specific occassion could be related to a promise unkept by a parent or a friend.. i know many of my freinds have said they would do something and then they would completly forget that they ever promised that.... the same goes with my parents.... it's so hurtfull when you know that you arent important enough to be remebered and to have someone go out of there way to make sure that they keep thier promises, esp your boyfriend, because if i had someone like you i would want to make sure that you knew that you where special enough to me for me to remember what i told you i would do.... but that's just me....
    anyways i really felt where you were coming from...and i want you to know that you have other people out there that appreciate you enough to keep there word....
    phil

  • 18 years ago

    by Robyn

    Hpe eveything wit u too is kk
    xoxo robyn

  • 18 years ago

    by Just Me

    Good job. lol I'm glad I could help... I like helping!!! lol!!! i'm not feeling so good... I'm going to bed much love
    Kat!

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