Give up?

by Purple   Mar 27, 2006


Drag me threw this dried up mud
Cracking it with a silent thud
Destroy it without a thought
As you do with everything in one shot
Forget what it was before you changed
Before you had your world rearranged
Kill the reminders of your dark past
Quick while your enjoyment still lasts
Drop that ax on me quick
And watch my head simply split

I'll run from this back wards dream
With my enemies banded in their frightening team
They'll chase me to the cliffs edge
There I will refuse to beg

My life will stay until they beat it from me
I'm sure one of them will think it's funny
Such a weak girl, yet so determined
To endure the pain that began so sudden
No gasping chokes to accompany my silent tears
As they bring in the least of my fears

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Felt like writing some thing... Moody, didn't expect it to be so violent. As long as my life doesn't reflect this. Only the nightmares I never remember.

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  • 18 years ago

    by bleed4eternity

    Ok to start off i am pretty sure that "back wards" should be one word
    secondly, i thought that this poem's third stanza was amazing
    lastly, the whole time i was reading this poem, i had memories of similar nightmares which is cool because you did such a good job with the description that i could easily image everything and relate

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Very good peice, writen well and holding attention thoughout

  • 18 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Very good poem its relly good.