Your Goddess of Love

by myshiningstar14   Mar 29, 2006


Rose lips that kiss
you softly, and the
flames of hell that
beckon us deeply.
Smooth skin and a
voice so delicate,
like the flapping
wings of a dove.

Perfect face, bold
green eyes and
long flowing
brunette hair, that
caress her every
move.

A pure heart, aligned
with compassion. This
goddess of love,
mourns the heartless
and embraces the
loving.

The glow that
traces her every
notion, the way
glitter touches her
body so elegantly,
that its like shes
your angel, from
heaven.

Invisible tinted
wings that illuminate
her, and the way she
can lure you in with
just one look. One
look, and your
body is jello, you've
lost it, you are hers.

The sound of her
voice that shakes
the soul's of men,
and her breasts
that seem to
grow with wisdom
in them.

You want to hold
her close, good
thing she is all
yours, she is
your goddess of
love.

The way she
moves, so
passionately toward
you makes you
hard and want to run
your hair through her
hair, and finger her
breasts.

The way she cures
you, and makes
all the pain go
away, with the
way she tilts her
head just right,
and gives you
that unforgettable
look, that you
cannot resist, even
if you tried.

The way her voice
sounds when she
says your name,
and the way her
tongue moves when
moves when she
she speaks, is like
the hallelujah
chorus, and yet
all at once, you
just want to kiss
her so she'll never
forget you.

Tears of ice that
trickle down her
pink cheeks, you
can't stand to see
her cry, because
she is your goddess
of love, and she
completes you.

No one means
more, and this is
for sure, she is
your girl, your
goddess of love.

**this is sort of the prospective from the mind of a guy..my one friend suggested i try different prospectives so here it is...hope you all enjoy it and hope I don't offend anyone...enjoy! and be honest in ur votes and comments! thxns...Lissa**

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  • 18 years ago

    by Tripp

    I can see why this is one of your favorites...definitely one of mine too. You are so skilled at putting emotion and imaging into every word, its really quite amazing...This is exactly how I feel about Becky. You capture the perspective well too. Well, keep up the great work :)

  • 18 years ago

    by alive in death

    Well i read them and i already apologized... i'll say it again... i'm sorry. but yes, i know how that word is spelled.... narcissism.. i mean i try my best to be right on about my spelling and all...
    an you are absolutely right... i can be a awesome friend... it's just that nobody ever gives me a chance too.... and i just wanted to say thank you again for giving me a chance... *hugs*
    phil

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    At least you think i am funni but i wasnt goin for funni phil, i was goin for roomantic tryign to sohow hte unbelievable but sensative side of a guy and this wasnt abotu me either abot us every gusy gurl..there goodess of love...gezz e get a clue...but yes u sound like a cool friend too

    lissa

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Yea ur funny phil that wasnt the reaction i wanted i was goin for a new style and i set you a private emai land it hurt a lil'...no mirror was involved jus a diff. prospective and a vrry thought in one too. and by the way just ot be smart assed..its spelled narcissism! :)

    lissa

  • 18 years ago

    by alive in death

    Well, well, well. are we a little bit sure of ourselves or are we not? *big sheepish grin* have you not got a case of narrsisism? this was really an actual funny read... cause i could just picture you staring in the mirror as you wrote this... lol.. your so funny, i really love your work. i have a feeling you would be a great friend... 5/5