Dertermination

by JL   Apr 1, 2006


Gasping for breath
Trying to see straight
You gave your all
Now you can only wait

Did you go fast enough,
Or were you to slow?
You can't take the anticipation
You have to know

Swaying where you stand,
Legs feel weak
You have no voice
When you try to speak

People surround you
Shivering and cold
Then it hits you
-you just won gold

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  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    Oh the nerves just run rampant...... wonderful write and congrats on the gold?

    Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela