Caress Me On The Dance Floor.(Acrostic)

by ASPHYXIATED   Apr 3, 2006


Caress Me On The Dance Floor.

Catch me slowly by my waist,
Adore my sweet fruity taste,
Release me now as we dance,
Embed me in your silent trance,
Sense my body close to yours,
Swiftly move among the floors.

Maintain a firm hold on me,
Embrace me close for all to see.

Once again clutch me tight,
Nest me by your side all night.

Trace your finger down my lips,
Hold me snug around my hips,
Enchant me as my body slips.

Darling move me like a doll,
Attach me to you so I don't fall,
Night shall come much to fast,
Control the rhythm make it last,
Emollient my body, make it last.

Fate has brought us here tonight,
Lingering in each others sight,
Objects of lust we are no more,
Observing each other in complete adore,
Refine&Caress me baby on the dance floor.

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  • 15 years ago

    by mandy

    I love your rhyming! Great discriptions. The emotion in the poem was so strong it was almost tangable! 5/5.

    -mandy :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Nee

    I Love !!!!
    This was a very good acrostic, seriously..I don't see lots of acrostic poems here that would be expressed the good way.
    Very well done.
    But here:
    "Night shall come much to fast,"
    - Did you mean "too" ? you know it gives a total different meaning.

    And although the wording was pretty strong, the rhyme went a bit cliche in the whole poem, the music was good but predictable at some parts.

    Very well done :)
    Write on

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    This was so beautiful! I loved the emotions you described because they took me back to a time when I was dancing with someone special. You are really talented and I look forward to reading more from you. Well done *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by Alexandra Jade Brewer

    Wow, I really loved this poem. The words and flow, and emotion were all amazing. You have a strong talent keep up the amazing work!

  • 16 years ago

    by Delicious 42

    I loved it!!! I feel everybit of it as I read. I can't believe u came up with something like that. Great 5/5! Plz go read some of my poems and give me some feedback thanks.

    MBL

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