Twenty-one

by ASPHYXIATED   Oct 22, 2009


Twenty-one balloons; blew with the breeze
begging for freedom to put them at ease.
Oh how ironic.

Two feet in the mud, I can't help but laugh--
Only you could of planned it this well.
Your final prank before you fell.

This is the part where the memories swim in
breaking down barriers and mental strength.

Who was I before you?

Time Warp. 5 years previous. Heart full of hope.
Hope of a future. I guess the futures over hyped.

Two feet in the mud, I can't help but laugh--
Only you could of planned it this well.
Proof you've broken the shell.

Twenty-one balloons; blew with the breeze
begging for freedom to put them at ease.
So, so ironic.

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Message me if you don't understand. (:

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  • 6 years ago

    by Burning Angel

    This is wonderful! I love how deep and all the emotions you put into the poem. I really liked reading it

  • 6 years ago

    by Amreen

    This is a wonderful piece dear. I see a deep thought and life behind your happiness and moments you share here. I love the story you weave in and the depth they unfold.

    Beautiful;)

    Keep writing......!

  • Wow, Lisa, that was beautiful, dear!
    I really loved it! ^_^