Suicidal

by Lilly   Apr 4, 2006


I know what happened and what you did,
How you wrecked your car with intent,
That you hoped to end your life,
Full of hate and resent.

But please hun' don't do that now,
That's not meant for your life,
Who knows what you'll do or whom you'll meet,
If you overcome this strife.

Who won't smile? And who won't be loved?
Who won't be merry and good?
Generations wont be born,
As they certainly should.

If you commit suicide,
Great things wont happen on earth,
The world without you in it,
Won't have quite its old worth.

Many people won't laugh and be gay,
Children will lose their idle,
Sunshine won't have as pure a ray,
Tears will take on a new title.

Forever we'll laugh a little less,
Remembering you each night,
There won't be a single hour,
The world won't miss your might.

A woman won't get her soul mate,
And you won't find her as well,
The effect will be tremendous,
Power will be added to Hell.

Grief and heartache will come again,
Often as it'll decide,
For some maybe more than others,
But in our hearts it will always reside.

For you have a talent great and rare,
That many desire and covet,
You can spread laughter easy as spring,
And you think nothing of it.

For truly you are an amazing man,
Whether you like it or not,
Your smile brightens any room,
You've something that can't be bought.

So if your life you chose to take,
Know your changing it all,
In more ways than any can count,
Without you more people shall fall.

Without you many a tear will be cried,
You'll not be there to comfort the eye,
Everyone's heart forever changed,
For if you can't do it, can I?

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  • 17 years ago

    by nobody truly knows me

    Wow...another great poem. i loved it so much!

  • 18 years ago

    by Lilly

    Thanks you! yea, this is about my ex-boyfriend. at the time i wrote it we were still dating. but we recently went through a pretty rough break up : /

  • 18 years ago

    by Polly

    Wow!!! You are such an amazingly talented poet! This is so amazing, if this is about someone you know they have a pretty awesome friend! Great work, I'm going to add you to my favourites your work is awesome! xx