In response to the universe

by erotema   Apr 6, 2006


"so apathy and mortal vice are now to be your state,
while you leave me to my design and shan't commiserate
your child," replied the man to that which spurned him just before.
"you long for recognition in a world that you abhor."

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  • 17 years ago

    by nobody truly knows me

    Grr...it won't let me vote.

  • 17 years ago

    by nobody truly knows me

    Short...very short...but great all the same. it was very deep...i don't think i would be able to do that with such a short poem...but you managed it perfectly. i loved it...5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by J Lau

    Short, sweet, complex and deep. Excellent write. It's a good thing it's not any longer... lol. Great work! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Fallen Angel

    Too true, too often do we attempt to find acceptance from a society we hate, I guess it begs the question do we attempt to gain acceptance because we hate it or do we hate it because it won't accept us...? Anyway, I digress, I really great write, you truely are a fabulously talented writer. Loved it 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Laura

    WOW you have just amazed me. Again your use of words is quite prodigious. Although the poem is short in length it speaks volumes and the message is loud and clear!
    Welcome to my favorites list!