The touch of sand

by StefQ   Apr 6, 2006


You and me, hand in hand, walking down the coast
I'm sharing a romantic moment with the one I love most
The sun is about the dive in the deep blue sea
You're my angel; you mean the world to me
Seagulls fly over us, while we're now lying on the ground
As we lay on the sand we hear the waves flowing, the only sound
Your body on top of mine, I love your tender touch
I wish we could lay here for eternity, is that asking for much
Your blonde hairs dancing elegantly in the light
The deep blue eyes of yours take away my every fright
We kiss... the touch of your lips, so delicate and sweet
We're so close to the sea that the water touches our feet
You're my dream, my fantasy, everything I long for
I know my heart is safe with you, I know you won't make it soar
I love you a lot; that's all I want you to know
Stay with me in this moment, don't ever go...

Copiright©2006 by Stefan Jovanovic

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  • 18 years ago

    by azlan26

    Aww another really really sweet poem...you write really good love poetry
    Again the only flaw I can seem to find is that the lines are a bit too short/long is a few places...but thats no biggie
    Great stuff

  • 18 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Wow, amazing write. I loved it. Keep up the good work.

    ~Joe~

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaitlyn

    This is really beautiful piece of yours! I could just imagine what was happenning. how you describe it all was fantastic. i felt at times it didnt flow but i loved every minute of it. you really captured it and its really sweet. =D

    Kat

  • 18 years ago

    by BehindThisSmilex

    Thanks for the comment =)

    i really like your poem
    nice job!

    --:CinDy

  • 18 years ago

    by Dark Kitten

    Beautiful poem Stef! I loved how each word simply ran through my mind like honey. It was simply and utterly beautiful. Good job!

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