*hugs tightly*, hunni I would take your pain away if I could and show you a brighter day, I would make you happier than ever...But I am not by your side in person, but always in spirit, so I can only be here for you, whenever you need a shoulder to cry on or just some one to talk to, I am only an email away, talk to me sweety....Very deep and sad poem, sounded just like me at the moment. But be strong hunn and we will make it, right!!!

Much Love Sabrina

That was really good....keep writin
*~*Hannah*~*

Oo honey =*( Can I hug you? O this is so sad. I feel so horrible because I can't do s*** from here. I can even hug you.

It was beautifully written. Wonderfull sweety. Happy to hear from you again. Hope you feel better soon

I love you sweety
-xxx-

Such beauty and such pain you know I will do any thing I can to help

''deemed forgotten''

You have this amazing use of words. I love how bits just jump out at me.

Common sense, i never had it either. For some reason i knew why forks werent allowed in the toaster but it thought it was oka for knives. :P

Immense poem as usual. *applauds*

LVz, me xxx

Yet another masterpiece by you, your poems are getting darker than ever before, i hope things are not as bad as ur poem potrays. Stay strong and hold on to yourself.

all the best and take care
5/5

Hey beautiful! Don't foget I love you and that when you are in the pit of dispair, sometimes all that is left to do is laugh at it all, and you'd be surprised how much that can help. Is there something that's happened, a new "past sin" or is it the past in general that is getting you down? *hugs* If you want to talk to me, you know I am here. Though saddening, this poem, achieves the excellence that I so often find in your powerful poetry. I wish you the good blessings of the world, and a helping hand. If I can do anything, you know where to find me. 5/5

-Tainted Mikochan

Aww hun, this is such a beautiful poem, i can relate to it as well, aww, this so beautiful, you've expressed yourself well in this piece of writing, im so glad to see you're submitting your poetry on here still, its a gift to read, take care,xxoo

Oh huni that was a very gud one!
I can so relate to it!! u did a gr8 job. I hope I cud be as talented as u r..bcuz most of times wen I try to write a gud poem it turns to forced rhymes and weird things.lol
keep up the gud work
Much Luv
NemO x0x0x0x0x

That was awesome. 5/5. I have a couple of questions for you but i'll address that later.
-Vino

Hey babe...aw i wish u didnt feel this way...plz try 22 b strong...im still h0ping we can meet asap!! i luv yo0!!

All ur poems are so good!! i really wish that i could write like u! lol
i love this one... i can relate...
love ya hun... xoxoxo