No tomorrow

by Mark   Apr 7, 2006


Dreading tomorrow
And hoping this storm will pass through the night
When my mind's still awake
But my body sleeps tight
And I fear that this storm
Will bring floods and despair
Because I created this monster
That will destroy what was there
You will feel it inside
Because this storm is yours too
The storm's in us all
Built up from the pain we go through
But tonight, we will see
What we've done with our hate
When we realize its strength
We'll all know, it's too late
When the sun tries to shine
And all that remains is silence's hum
There'll be no hate
No death
No fear
With a tomorrow that will never come

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  • 19 years ago

    by Amz

    Wow..i love your stuff..u r really talented!

  • 19 years ago

    by GoodMorning

    "Dreading tomorrow
    And hoping this storm will pass through the night
    When my mind's still awake
    But my body sleeps tight
    And I fear that this storm
    Will bring floods and despair
    Because I created this monster
    That will destroy what was there
    You will feel it inside
    Because this storm is yours too"

    ^those^ are amazing lines, i loved them, and they flowed nicely. =)

    i really liked the whole plot/idea of this poem. you're a good writer, Mark. and you're improving. you'll have your awards in no time. =P

    i love you.

  • 19 years ago

    by xXxDarkDreamerxXx

    I really like dark poetry and this one is one of the best keep it up! ^_^

  • 19 years ago

    by jess

    HEY ANOTHER AMAZING POEM FROM YOU!! GREAT WORK!!
    LOVE JESS XXXXXXXXXXXXXXX

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