In Time Truth Will Reveal (Collab)

by Italian Stallion   Apr 9, 2006


~Collaboration with Marjan~

In the realms of emptiness
Sweet seemingly lies dwell
Beneath layers of glittering
Over used chains from hell

Here you see
Not one, but two ways to excel
Though you may not agree
It is very plain to see

Victorious are the souls
Touched by the breezes
of truth, divinity and light
while usage of lies increases

Deep within the depths of hell
While in time the truth will reveal
but who am I to foretell
this entity that is unreal

The sun of truth
Whether behind the clouds
Or hidden in a dungeon
Finds a way to shine so proud

For over time the truth will reveal
And these lies that seem to cause Hell
Will be disavowed
With no more time to dwell

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  • 17 years ago

    by milly

    I think this is my favourite one of yours that I have read, I felt that the rhyme scheme worked really well and that the rhythm flowed much more smoothly than some of your other writes. I loved the imagery you used...it really helped me to visualise the poem's meaning..good job!
    much love x

  • 17 years ago

    by Jason

    Another great poem, while reading it, it definately painted a picture in my mind. Good stuff.

    -Jason

  • 18 years ago

    by Cyma Khan

    Best of luck dear...

  • 18 years ago

    by PnQ Mod Account

    Very nice collab you two!

  • 18 years ago

    by *-*PoisonedSoul~_~

    It was really good. i like the ryme pattern that it has. good job! :D 5/5!!