Six Feet Under

by Sean Dohr   Apr 9, 2006


Death is so easy,
compared to life.
Dealing with issues,
with only a knife.

A slit to the wrist,
or a neuce to the neck,
is just a sign,
of a lack of respect.

A disrespect to your friends,
your family, and you.
If you're depressed,
there are things you can do.

There are ways to get help,
from family and friends.
If you have done wrong,
you can make ammends.

It's just too simple,
to give up and let go.
Things can always get better,
believe me, I'd know.

The strongest people,
are the ones who survive.
They fight to the end,
just to say they're alive.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    It seems to be missing something...when i read most of your poems they are more then just words.
    4/5
    ~Wings

  • 18 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    That was a very touching poem! Very good! I just love all of you poems! 5/5!

  • 18 years ago

    by melly xx

    Again your last stabzas really sum the poem up and are amazingly good!!!
    5/5 to the maxxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by PS

    The strongest people,
    are the ones who survive.
    They fight to the end,
    just to say they're alive.

    that part really clicked with me. its amazing. and really touches me. aweseom poem

  • 18 years ago

    by ღ»Lσιѕ«ღ

    You write poems from a total different point of view!! I think thats what makes you such an unique writer!!! I really love your work!!! I wish i can write
    like you one day!! Thanx for entering my contest!!! Well Done!! 5/5

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