Xo0ox...its too late...xo0ox

by Unity   Apr 11, 2006


I only realize it now
Ive taken everything for granted
because everything had to be my way
i had to get everything i wanted

you were the one person who knew me
the only one that seemed too care
and now that i really need you
your not even there

i walked all over your heart
and every night i made you cry
i hurt you more and more each day
and i made you wanna die

i only cared about one thing
not seeing that i was hurting you
even though i treated you badly
too me, you always stayed so true

now i know what Ive done
i have too face my fate
i tried too stop the blood from dripping
then i realized, it was too late

your life ended tragically
and I'm the one too blame
my life's going to be empty now
because of a childish game

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There are so many points too my poem.

1. Everybody takes things for granted, and we never truly appreciate what we have, until its too late.

2. There is always one person out there who truly cares about us, but we either, push them away or treat them like dirt, and when we need them, they're not gonna be there anymore.

3. You can push someone over the edge by the things you say and do, so take caution on what you say and do. Your words are the most hurtful and powerful things on earth, when you do something physical to wards someone i.e Punch them... it can be taken back,they will forgive u and easily get over it! ..but when you say something nasty, it sticks with the person forever.

4. people out there, always think that people commit suicide because of somebody like they're friend has hurt them, or they're bf/gf has broken up with them, simple things like this ...but its not always the case! Most of the time,people Commit suicide because of someone in they're family! either ..not showing them they care about them.and neglecting the person,or something happening in the family! ....ALWAYS SHOW UR FAMILY AND FRIENDS U LOVE THEM! ..CAUSE ONE DAY YOU MAY LOSE THEM..AND YOU NEVER KNOW WHEN YOU WILL....

5. People, in real life ...over the Internet or anywhere, play silly little games with one another,sometimes ..things are said and it could hurt the other person, and drive them too suicide, be careful what you say and what you do!

x...R.I.P ALEX...x
even though i didnt personally know the girl, her story was so heartfelt, and emotional!

Alex Teka was only 12 or so years old and she committed suicide, because of the nasty and hatred things people were saying too her, by txt messages and through emails.
This girls life could of been saved, if they only realized what they were doing too her.

Your words are a powerful thing, please be careful what you say too others, you could help save a life,or you could take one by what u say!

...Watch what you say...

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  • 16 years ago

    by StormyStar

    Wow! your right! you made some pretty good points! lol your poem is very powerful! im adding you to my faves! lol 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Wow its was really great poems... i feel so impress w/ ur poem and i realize one thing about some words...coz onetime i experience it and its not really easy for that situation. well good luck and continue writing such a great poems of you. god bless

  • 18 years ago

    by ├Truely_Spoken┤

    I love teh way you outlined the points to your poems, sometimes you have to do that because some ppl dont realize how deep a poem can really be- but there are so many interpretations
    nice rite, i love it
    plz check out my poem impulse

  • 18 years ago

    by BeeBeeGun

    Very touching poem also very sad
    thankz for your comment
    you did a good job at writing this poem
    i can see why its ur favourite theres so much meaning to it

    keep it up -

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    Hey darling. this was really deep and t0uching. very sad als0. thank u heap f0r the c0mmentz 0n my w0rk - they meant al0t t0 me!! =]

    l0ve fr0m
    d0ra