Believe me

by rocker666chick   Apr 11, 2006


Eye\\\'s blurred
looking but cannot find a word.
Lurking a dark hallway
taking my breath away.

Everytime I try to talk
the voices in my head
stop.
my words are locked.

There is a reason
this time
it comes in rhyme.
It is as true as this poem is mine.
If you don\\\'t believe me fine.

but when in time
you must egnolige this rhyme.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Stabbylou

    Neat poem, I think you mean acknowledge at the end but other then that good work :) 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by jello

    Nice..good flow. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Good peice, simple and clearly written.

  • 18 years ago

    by Miss Pipp

    I didn't really understand what the poem was about. it was kindof confusing some of the times but it was a good poem all the same. keep it up

    pip xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    This was good. It was nice and simple. There was some errors in it, But I think there just site errors. Keep up the great work 5/5

    luv natalie x-x

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