A kiss in the rain

by StefQ   Apr 13, 2006


A tragic ending for something that used to be so great,
A guy and a girl desperately in love, but love turned into hate...
One jealous friend, made their ways part,
He made up stupid things which cut the girls heart
That horrible day, meant the end of such a beautiful relationship,
They had it all in the palm of their hands but they let it slip ...
She never gave him a chance to tell her his friend lied
She wouldn't put her pride a side, instead of that she cried
Both of their hearts broken, but the guy didn't lose his hope
He wrote a love letter and stuck it into an envelope,
The envelope ended up in front of the girl's door, next to a red rose
Early in the morning she saw the letter and read it while the sun rose,
Tears fall on the table and a smile appears on her lovely face
For her this world instantly turned into a better place
As she read the part:"Please wait for me tomorrow,
I need to explain it all, coz I can't bare this sorrow..."
She waited for him and finally she heard a knock on her door
The door swings open and she sees him kneeling on the floor
With his arms wide open with on them written in red:
"I still love you, Please forgive me" and instantly she forgot everything his friend said,
And the only thing she now feels is love, no more pain,
She falls down on her knees and they kissed in the rain...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Mitch

    A beautiful poem, I like it. A few spelling errors though. but other then that, great!

  • 18 years ago

    by Fallen~Tears

    I liked it especially the last few sentences and i love the title.. but for me the rhyme scheme seemed all over it was still a great poem but you might wanna go back and double check ...

    ~!*FallenTears~!*
    ~!*Meaghen~!*

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    The title stood out for a love poem one. There were a few spelling typos, though, such as:
    red it while the sun rose,
    *read*
    etc so you may want to go through it again. It seemed more like a story, which is good, but you might want to read it over to double check that you've avioded cliches. It really is a good poem and seemed to have a good flow. It was grouped together but did keep my attention.