Comments : S***s And Little Cuts

  • 15 years ago

    by Natalie

    Wow, That was really good! I loved it. I'm lost for words, It was brillant! Keep up the great work! And thanx for the comment =]

    5/5 Though for this poem, It was awesome!!

    luv natalie x-x

  • 15 years ago

    by Mona

    Wow there is so much anger in this poem and so much pain.
    So many feelings.

    Very powerfull write.

    Loved this poem. Very well done.

    Lotsaaaaaaaa love
    -xxx-

  • 15 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Very powerful full of feeling and strong expression. the peice flows extremely well and the rhymes are very unforced and seem natural. the peice is portrayed very well thoughout and hsa lot of meaning to it.

    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Once an Angel

    Ow, wow hun, very angry, but I can't say I haven't felt the same way many times. I have tried to quit so many f u c k i n times, but I can't, and I am so sick of being treated like a sicko, emo, mental, etc. They just want someone to talk about, some story to pass around school for a little while, but that's it because past that they don't give a D***. I poem I wish I could have written myself.

    -Tainted Mikochan

  • 15 years ago

    by Kaylee

    I think this poem was more sad then anger as in more pain even if the speaker won't show it. It was very emotional and was different than the regular self-harm poems I'm use to reading.

  • 15 years ago

    by katie!

    That was a really angry piece there, you could feel the anger while reading it, there was a time when I felt like this but I have been hospitalized for 7 months so I havent been able to cut at all... which is a good thing, try your best to stop it wont get you anywhere, sorry you feel like this..

  • 15 years ago

    by 111308

    Wow This Is A Very Powerful Poem!
    I loved it! Im Speechless! It Was Amazing! Your A Really Good Writer Keep Up The Great Work!

  • 15 years ago

    by Hayley

    This is really good i know how you feel, people judge without knowing, but who gives a shit waht people think... they just dont understand ! this poem has a lot of emotion, keep writing and never give up ! comment on some of my new ones ! hugs-hayley

  • 15 years ago

    by gasping for air

    Wow girl, you said it all right there... pretty powerful stuff right there... keep up the awesome work!!!
    take care
    amanda and baby

  • 15 years ago

    by aimee

    That brillent n beautiful.

  • 15 years ago

    by Polly

    Very powerful and full of emotion, I could just feel the anger and pain in it, well done and take care
    - Polly

  • 15 years ago

    by S R P

    I really liked this.. the line about the cat, i've blamed it on my rabbit and cat many times.. *blush* good job 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by S R P

    I really liked this.. the line about the cat, i've blamed it on my rabbit and cat many times.. *blush* good job 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by x x bRittAny

    BEAUTIFUL.. i thought it was bloody great! well done i love it!

  • 15 years ago

    by jello

    Wow this was good. good job...5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by RawrItsDollfacex

    Soooo much anger... yet it is conforting to the likes of someone like me........ so powerful..... i wish i had a writing talent like your own....

    Love ya.
    Brandi Dumencic aka Deadlilys

  • 15 years ago

    by myxlittlexcut

    I hate when people dont even try to understand

  • 15 years ago

    by chris

    Loved this poem i find it ridiculous how people seem to care so much about what other people do, it doesnt matter anyway, but this to me is such a poem of power and strength and taking what it is you do and saying yes this is me this is who i am, you deal with it because i am cool. so it is wonderful, thank you for the comment and i will check out more of your stuff later

  • 15 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Well this one was bitter but facts, message is so clear and it has been said quite loudly, liked the way u potrayed the complete poem

    all the best and take care
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Cassie

    Wow .. i hate it when people talke shit and they dont even know or understand .. kinda pretty much know how u feel there !!