Very powerful full of feeling and strong expression. the peice flows extremely well and the rhymes are very unforced and seem natural. the peice is portrayed very well thoughout and hsa lot of meaning to it.
Ow, wow hun, very angry, but I can't say I haven't felt the same way many times. I have tried to quit so many f u c k i n times, but I can't, and I am so sick of being treated like a sicko, emo, mental, etc. They just want someone to talk about, some story to pass around school for a little while, but that's it because past that they don't give a D***. I poem I wish I could have written myself.
That was a really angry piece there, you could feel the anger while reading it, there was a time when I felt like this but I have been hospitalized for 7 months so I havent been able to cut at all... which is a good thing, try your best to stop it wont get you anywhere, sorry you feel like this..
This is really good i know how you feel, people judge without knowing, but who gives a shit waht people think... they just dont understand ! this poem has a lot of emotion, keep writing and never give up ! comment on some of my new ones ! hugs-hayley
Loved this poem i find it ridiculous how people seem to care so much about what other people do, it doesnt matter anyway, but this to me is such a poem of power and strength and taking what it is you do and saying yes this is me this is who i am, you deal with it because i am cool. so it is wonderful, thank you for the comment and i will check out more of your stuff later