Failed so many times

by Coral   Apr 17, 2006


I've failed so many times Ive lost count
sometimes being so mad i scream and shout
I'm so tired of failing each time i try
all i wanna do is die
but god wont let me and i hate him for it
i cant live one more day with pain so bad it make me sick
this is all so wrong I'm not suppose to be here
I'm not suppose to be with all my fears
so i made a great plan and tried again
i tried to do it over easter weekend
i took the dagger and made one last cut
but soon enough i found it wasn't enough
so i took a gun and put it to my head
but there were no bullets to make me dead
I took a rope made a sloppy noose
and when i jumped my head was to loose
So what else can i try tonight
i told god i just want to die
but he makes m fail every time i try

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  • 17 years ago

    by SaveMe?

    Wow this is such an amazing poem i like the bits at the end about suicide and stuff :]
    your an amazing writer
    5/5
    lovelove
    Alice
    &&thanks for the comment @]
    xxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Aww, Sweety, This is sad. I really hope this isnt true. If so, I'm always here if you need to talk.

    You expressed your feelings very clearly. But I do think you could go a little deeper. Really digg in deep. Explain how much it's hurts that god won't let you take your life. Just a bit of an idea. 5/5 Though. I thought it was great!

    - Natalie x-x

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley

    Are these poems true? I don't want to hurt yourself! They are written farely good but...

  • 18 years ago

    by Coral

    I am a failure at everything i do
    so maybe you can give me ideas on what to do

  • 18 years ago

    by Coral

    I am a failure at everything i do
    so maybe you can give me ideas on what to do

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