Feel so alone

by perfectlyBROKEN   Apr 19, 2006


When my family is sleeping, dreaming sweet dreams
im wide awake, crying, and trying not to see
I feel so alone in a crowded room

I feel so torn
but im still in one piece
I can't forget my past, present and future
Im so tired of feelings of lonliness

Im now sitting in the dark, crying full of regret
I have noone to trust anymore
I feel death, i can feel it near

i feel ignored and so doomed
I feel cold when the sun is shining bright
Im not that litlle girl you see with a big smile
Im the girl that is bleeding inside so broken.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Heba

    OMG.what an amazing piece..You know,that sometimes happens to me too,when you have the feeling that no one really can feel how much you are sad and hurt while you are just looking for someone to listen to you or try to understand how you really feel.

    Excellent.5\5..

  • 16 years ago

    by Birgit

    Thank you for you comment, on my poem!
    I like this one! It really reflects your emotions and how you are feeling. Keep it up =)
    xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Princess

    I really luv diz 5/5 i can relate

  • 17 years ago

    by Brokenxx [aka Alex]

    Hey that's really good, sad though. Keep on writing :)

  • 17 years ago

    by dyingxpassion

    Hey that poem was really good... i can really relate to itt

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