Look to the sky

by master of shadow   Apr 22, 2006


Look to the stars
Against a jet black sky,
Praying the sun shall never rise
That there shall never be another day.
The burning points in the air
The only light upon the world,
Gently glowing upon us all.
But soon the sun shall shine
The bright unfeeling light,
That creates a new day
A new day in hell
A new day upon the Earth.
The darkness surrounds us
Wrapping us in a dark cloak
Saving us from the coming strife,
Until the sun shall rise,
Bathing the world in a golden light
Turning the sky a blood red
And starting the pain again.

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  • 17 years ago

    by LostHopesCrimsonTears

    Only problem i had with this one was the "golden gold" line..

  • 18 years ago

    by MemoirsOfMe

    The imaginative in this poem is great. I enjoyed reading this, and some of the lines amazed me. Keep writing!

  • 18 years ago

    by Jackie Marie

    I like how you used some personification:

    "A new day upon the Earth.
    The darkness surrounds us
    Wrapping us in a dark cloak"

    I thought that was a good one. This is a good poem and I can tell you worked hard on it. :)

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Vegetable

    Wow, really beautiful. Great symbolism, and imagery. All in all great poem. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Very beautiful. it had great imagery, it painted a picture in my mind. this was an amazing poem..you are very talented. I love the way you ended it. Great job! 5/5*

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