A Patient Revenge

by NothingGoldCanStay   Apr 22, 2006


Awake...
Sad sleeper...
Come and make...
The day neater..

Innocent eyes.
Peaceful voice.
Oh don't cry,
Yes, there is a choice.

Lost in imagination,
And in shine.
Reached the destination,
That will be mine.

Give me life.
Give me love.
Give me a knife!
don't forget a glove!

Pray with me,
Of the time,
Because there will be,
A senseless crime!

The crime she did!
The gun she stole!
The way she hid!
The body hanging from a pole!

She took him!
And so much more.
Wait till the grim
Hits her to the floor!

No way up...
I have reached the bottom of hell...
This volcano wouldn't erupt.
No soul to sell.

It was her ,
Who killed me.
And he was there.
She made him see.

Her flamed eyes!
He use to be mine!
Her hateful cries,
I wasn't fine.

She had thoughts,
Of me hurting.
He shouldn't have bought,
A little flirting!

I will reach
What was once mine!
To him I will teach!
The senseless crime!

I will get my turn,
Don't you fret.
I will make her burn,
That's what she get!

I will be strong!
For future reasons.
I will hang on.
For all the seasons.

I will rebel
When the time come
Not out of hell?
Ha ha, no fun?

Go take a hike!
Mock me I mock you!
But so childlike.
Have I not grew?

If I hang her.
What would I gain?
If only there were
A little less pain.

But wait!
She hurt me!
She was my mate!
Can you not see!

She took the knife,
And slit my neck.
Took my life!
What the heck!

And there he stood.
Staring at me.
What was the good,
Letting him be?

But its her I want.
So I let him stay.
But for now I shall taunt.
And wait for the magnificent day.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Emma Brown

    Very long but the rhythm kept strong. I'm a poet and I didn't know it lol (how original? haha ... loed the poem, 5/5.
    Much love, Emma xox

  • 17 years ago

    by Daenerys Stormborn

    This is interesting and i actually liked it, but honestly, it didn't make too much sense.

  • 17 years ago

    by Ebony

    Wow that poem is so good. Its like really really really good. It was fun reading too. Keep writing. your work is awesome.
    ~Ebony~

  • 17 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    I can relate 2 this in sum way... nice poem i like it heapz

  • 17 years ago

    by blueknight

    Wow what a loong well written poem that expressing your feelings great stuff girl keep it up...

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