Angelic Suicide (multiple haikus)

by JL   Apr 22, 2006


Quickly turning blue
Cold water runs about her
Tide pulling her out

Rocked by the currents
As whales sing their mournful tune
Slowly falling down

Gasping her last breath
Her life begining to flash
Heaven takes her soul

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  • 18 years ago

    by JL

    Thanks Ang~ i suck at spelling, and i fixed the errors. (i can't count lol)

  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    JL, this is very very good.... sad, but written so well. Wonderful use of haikus....

    Two things..... 2nd haiku 1st line, the count is off by one syllable.... 3rd haiku 2nd line begining should be beginning.

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