Found a love thats true

by gemowski   Apr 27, 2006


i woke up lay next to you,
i finally found a love so true,
so Small and delicate,
so strong and sweet,
your bluely green just stare at at me

you're like a star, you shine so bright
i just wanna hold you all through the night.

you're like the sun a burning flame i just wanna hold you again and again.

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  • 17 years ago

    by lana

    What a heart touching poem
    i liked it
    it brought my feelings up
    loved it
    GREAT WORK

    lana

  • 17 years ago

    by Casey

    It's not very organized, and the word choice is horrible... but somehow it still manages to say that you love somone.

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    Aww.. that is very sweet! :) 5/5
    jessy xox

  • 18 years ago

    by walking alone

    It's veary good it sounds like your brother gets in to his poems

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