EXCELLENT, EXCELLENT, EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!! This poem is SOOOOOOOOO touching. You are one of the greatest writers on this site, your gonna have to promise me your never going to stop writing. This poem would have taken me forever to write...actually I don't think i'd be able to write something that good!! You put everything into this poem, how you felt...specifically, what he meant to you, and how much you love him. Most people don't have that. Keep writing. You better email me to tell me...no promise me your gonna keep writing! Love always,
-Hayley-

This one brought tears to my eyes because i can relate to this poem so much it's like you went inside my very mind! So much feeling! I just love it! Great job!

That's so sad :( I hope it's not true... if it then stay strong dear *hugs you*
It was very good written and a lot of emotion came out of it. Awesome writing!
Keep it up!

I well known sentiment, one I know many of us have experienced in our own lives and can really realt to. I have watched as many people I love, decided to turn to me for adivice when I am just sitting there screaming inside my head "But I love you!" To express those feelings your poem was done well. I think some if the times you used "well" in th beginning of your poem it should have been "while" because well doesn't really work right.

-Tainted

Wow! i actually started crying. this is EXACTLY how I feel about someone right now. its very good.

This Is Such A Wonderful Poem...I Luved It...Absolutly Amazing! Hope To See More Of Your Poems Soon Enuf...
Take Care...
Luv,
The Bell :]

This poem is amazing! The flow was perfect and It was so sad. I loved this poem! I can really relate to it. Great job! 5/5**

Nice and touching poem. Totally amazing!

Awesome i have felt the same way\
hey check out my poems if you get a chance i will greatly apprieciate it

OmG....DiS iS LyK Da BesT PoeM i CaMe AcRoSS So FaR....KeeP Up Da GooD WorK....ByE....

-patti-

I cried...im goin throo the same exact thing

This poem honestly brought tears to my eyes hunni....I think we have all been through this, I have and I was soooo inlove with him, but I knew he would never be mine, he loved some one else and I hated her..I was just nor his type and that broke my heart!! It took me over a year to get over him, though he was never mine...Loved this poem, something we can all relate to...I am just sorry to hear that you are going through this pain hunni, be strong!!

Love always, Sabrina

Hey love.. this is a really good poem.. i know how it feels to love someone... who is head over heels for someone else.. and while you'll do anything for them.. they will do anything for her.. and seeing them together kills you because you wish so much.. that you.. could be the one..

please comment on one of mine..

xx

Hey hun, thats really good poem you got there. hope you are ok (:

Xactly how i feel.

I love this poem...it reminds me of my ex boyfriend...This is a GREAT poem...

Renee Loves Alex

I have felt exactly like that. Except alot worse... :\

OMG! i love this poem!! it's effin awesome!!!! gr8 job!!!

Omg omg omg. I feel exactly that way at this very moment. It was so beautiful and so much emtion i love it. WOW. Amasing poem!

This poem is sooo awesome and soo true...