How Do I Die??

by Vane   Apr 29, 2006


My heart aches
Im trying to find the reason
Im so hurt
I just wanna live my life

Just leave me the f**k alone
Its a long way to happiness
And I need to find my way

But this darkness is consuming me
I cant get away
I need 2 find the light 2 get away
But cant u see ur blocking my way

Im in hell only the devil can help me now
I need to get away
My soul is drenched in secrets and covered in lies
All I need is the light

Just lead me to the light and tell me everythings alright

Gun to head or knife to throat
Blade to wrist or fall from high
You pick one: how do I die?

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  • 16 years ago

    by sexyCheckers

    I don't like people that comment on how good sad/depressing poems are.... Because it's not about whether they're good or not, it's whether they show emotion, and clearly this one does.... I hate submitting poems like this because some people may think I'm a tad screwed up.... Hmmm, 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    WOW!! Excellent poem. At worst I didn't understand it but as I read on I understood. I think you did a very good job on this poem and I liked the last stanza. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by clare

    Woah this is really gud!! ur a really good writer...
    anywayz if u culd coment n vote on my poems id realy appreciate it.. mayb u culd giv me cum pointers??
    Thanx!
    XXX
    **Clare*

  • 18 years ago

    by cassie

    You can feel the emotion through the words, this is a really good poem, i know how you feel, if u ever need to talk im here for you, and if you could comment on some of my poems it would be much appreciated.
    love cass xoxo

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