If You Loved Me

by *Cosmic*Whispers*   May 2, 2006


If you really loved me like you said

you'd have noticed all the times I've bled

you'd have noticed all the times I've cried

you'd have noticed all the times I've tried

to create perfection just for you

another battle I've struggled through

just for a chance to be the one

you turn to when everyone else has gone

the one you kiss and hold so tight

the one you want all through the night

the one you protect when the rain starts to fall

the one you encourage to be proud and stand tall

in the endless darkness i want to be your light

coz in my world full of pain your the only thing thats right

still it hurts me so much when you say that you care

coz when I'm scared and alone i know you ain't there

I'm stuck in a loop, can't stop spinning around

but when I fall you don't catch me and i crash to the ground

so please just be honest coz its breaking my heart

if you love me then tell me, I'm falling apart

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  • 17 years ago

    by SilenceBreaksTheHeart

    Hey...I was trying to find a poem of your that I haven't commented on so I could leave you a comment and tell you how much me and my sister appreciate your comments...but it looks like I've commented on the all :P. Or at least most of them I suppose. So yeah, lol. Thank you for the comments they mean so much...and yes it is an older sister but I doubt she'll make an account..I'll probably add some more of her poems on mine though so check them out.
    Well thanks again for the comments and you are a truly amazing poet. When I read your poems it's like I can't think of anything but "wow" lol.
    I can't wait to see more of your poetry. Keep it up.
    Breanna xD

  • 17 years ago

    by SilenceBreaksTheHeart

    That was amazing. I can really relate to this one, I loved it, it's one of my favorites of yours. You are such a good poet. Keep it up.

    5/5

    Breanna

  • 17 years ago

    by k

    Wow that was fab, it seems your are a natural at poetry! unlike me, i find it so hard to put whats in my head onto paper. but never mind, loved your poem. thanx for reading mine. byeeeeeeeee. xoxoxoxox kiz xoxoxox

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