To Much To Offer

by Batman   May 3, 2006


Hold your Heart
Drop Your Pain
Let Your Feelings
Fall Like Rain
Cause Life Is Mysterious
To Much To Offer
But If She Holds Her Heart
Theres No Way To Stop Her

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  • 17 years ago

    by Tormented

    Hey!
    This poem is short but sweet.
    Very well written
    There was a some rhyme in it.
    And i loved it!! 5/5

    Keep writing!

    TORM

  • 17 years ago

    by Odd

    Hey i love this poem it is so awsome. it sounds like it came from your heart. keep it up. : )

  • 17 years ago

    by Cyma Khan

    Short but sweet

  • 17 years ago

    by WriterX

    The poem is well written, with a small rhyme, or as I call it "white rhyme".

    Just wandering, shouldn't it be "Too much to offer"?

  • 17 years ago

    by Aaron Foster

    I liked it it short but it also shows exitment

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