Inside It's War

by Free Spirit   May 3, 2006


Oh sweet emancipation,
let you dawn on me,
Let me free

from this law of love
which brings along the
misery.

Though the command
is in thee hands of the
Lord, But I can no
longer sway this sword.

This warrior yet has become
weak to become a new is
something she must seek.

Broken into ruins inside
as, this beast in me lives
and now can no longer
hide.

The incognitoness is
starting to fade, it's true
face... a look of disgust
appears a shadow of
disgrace.

The looks and results are
forbidden so they will
remain hidden.

Viewers might even fear
what love has done to
a beauiful heart to become
so hideous, so shattered...

The longings the wants
desires thrusting for
years...

Wishing praying and crying
to see the one she loves so...
She wants to get over him
yet she just can't let go...

and so this true lover
will wait some more...

with the strenght
she has she will continue
fighting this war.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Void

    Hey! I have just read a few of your poems, and I wasn't quite sure what to put on the comments, because I hate leaving tiny little comments that don't say much - so unless I have lots to go on about, I try not to leave anything at all. Anyway, now that I've gotten to a more recent poem, I can tell that you've grown so much as a writer over time - even over a short amount of time, you just got better with each one. And I know it's random to say, but it always makes me proud when I see someone progressing, I get all happy for them lol. So anyway, this one was really good, especially the beginning - I really liked the first two stanzas. I also enjoy the fact that you have so many love poems. Some people like variety, but I will always be a lover of love. Nice writes! -Stefhy

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany Hampson

    That is a good....and thanks for commenting on my poem my crush.....

  • 17 years ago

    by sweetdreams16

    Yea! We do relate in this situations...anyways! yea u can email me to at iloveaj_09@hotmail.com or ms_carebear_09@hotmail.com.....just email me whenever...and yea love is complicated sometimes and I hate that but I'm with someone that I love to death he is the sweetest thing on Earth...well I love this poem its the BOMB...well i gotta go...

    Peace
    ..*..Renee Loves Alex..*..

  • 17 years ago

    by waking up inside

    Wow.. its wonderful.. check out mine if you like. they aren't as good as yours, but if ur bored u might want to read them.. you are really talented.. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by SingleWing

    Thats rele rele good! I like the way you rhyme...very well done... x x x