Fading..

by xXxDarkDreamerxXx   May 3, 2006


Word\'s that i\'ve never said
linger in my head.
And my sins I will one day pay.
While I lay here in my bed
I feel lonely depressed
theres no one here, im always alone.
School just causes me more stress
I have no sanctuary not even home.
To many people pretending to like me
they dont know anything about my life,
they are blind for they cant see,
that the darkness is closer to me that the light.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lost & Delirious

    I like this poem, I can totally relate to it. Keep writing. Good job.

  • 18 years ago

    by bleed4eternity

    I loved the last line!
    way to end the poem strong
    yeaaaaaaaa-a

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Very good, I can relate to it. You may want to go back and edit your poem for missing words like the last sentence. Keep it up!

    Thanks for your comment

  • 18 years ago

    by Fallengod667

    "The Darkness is closer to me than the light"

    Amazing..This last line is great..I'm very impressed with your poetry, and thank you for the comment..5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Great peice. though the last line could do with some work, just doesnot fit the remained propally. other than that though it's a very well written and well expressed peice

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