Another Ring

by Erika   May 5, 2006


I don't wanna be,
another loveless girl.
I don't wanna be,
left here waiting for you.
I don't wanna be,
another love-sick puppy.

I don't wana be,
hurting for you.
I don't wanna be,
crazy for you.
I don't wanna be,
just another memory.

I don't wanna be,
another ring on your necklace.
I WANT to be,
the ring on your hand.

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  • 19 years ago

    by lonelynow

    Nice work. i really like this. it really involves the reader, and has a clear ending.

    well done and thanks for the comment.

    xxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by holly

    I like yourthe use of repetition in this poem short but effective
    xxALLYxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Cody

    Good poem as always, how are you? E-mail me sometime you know my adress hope to hear from you

    bye Cody

  • 19 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Very nicely penned poem, loved it

    all the best and take care
    5/5

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