Mum, a fading memory

by Amanda   May 10, 2006


Mum please come back,
do not just walk away,
And leave me all alone,
not for another day,

Mum why do you do it,
love the boys and not me?
We are all your children,
so open your eyes and see,

Not only are you hurting me,
confusing my brother as well,
Ruining our sibling friendship,
just looking at him I can tell,

I want to get to know you,
I need you more than ever,
I want you to know I want you,
and I am loving you forever,

I have plenty of friends,
but it is not the same,
You messed up my head,
treated my life as a game,

I need your arms to hug me,
when I am scared and alone,
A mothers love is all i needed,
but I guess I will make it on my own.

Copyright 2006 - Amanda Linzi

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  • 17 years ago

    by Fallen~Tears

    Wow nice, again such a sad poem..but it was a really great write 5/5

    ~!*FallenTears~!*
    ~!*Meaghen~!*

  • 17 years ago

    by J Lau

    This is such a sad and emotional poem. The cry of attention jumped out of the page, it's just so touching. Great write. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    I hope you're okay. This was a really emotional poem. The flow was really good. Take care!

  • 17 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Aww this poem is so sad. You did a great job at expressing your feelings and really bring out the emotions in the poem. The flow and rhythm of it held up well.. Great job on this!

  • 17 years ago

    by dora

    0h huni l0t 0f em0ti0n in this piece very p0werful g0od j0b 0n it hun uve expressed urself g0od. stay str0ng luv ya

    l0ve fr0m
    d0ra

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